WOW!!!...dat was a great one i love it!!

I think that a little bit more attention to grammar and spelling would improve things and make your story more readable. Erotica need not be carelessly written and good grammar can be sexy too.

Wow!even tho im not a lesbian, im confortable readin stories like this, and seriously..i havent been this turned on for quite some time lol!
loved this poem!
it rocked!
keep them cumming...
love fern x

Wow! When does the movie come out?
Nate aka "The Tie Guy"

That was so hot lol...I'm not lesbian but that was good. I mean...wow! lol
5/5 for sure

Breanna

This is allright i aint less but its a good story

Like wow!

Dude that is so fuking hot that turned me on lol...

Great poem. im not les, but great discription and great poem. 5/5

Omg your poem turned me on. wow, it was so hot.

Wooww when i started reading it at first i had to continue it,,, it really turned me on OMG!!! its great 5/5 woooow its a very good one i loved it

Turned on isnt even the word for wat i feet wjile i read this poem.it made me wanna fuk omg...that was so hiot i wish i was there wow that is sexy!!!

-victoria.aka._lez-babii

That was awsome!! turned me on!!! keep the amazing poems coming!

Well babe im glad you had fun, or should i say im glad youre having fun? lol anyways i liked it, good stuff

heather

Fcuk me that was mint i wish i was experiancing that. it made me horny as fcuk im really wet now great poem do somemore lol love yewww xxx

WOW!! That was awesome!! Im all wet!!! Damn its been waaay too long since Ive been with a woman!!! lol HUGS!!! :)

Very Sexxxy.. love it!!.. keep u the good work..

Like everyone else said...
WOW
That was amaziinq
=]
Keep iit up

Wow.what an amazing expirience lolz
good job.
made it come to life.

Like someone above me said turned on doesnt even begin to cover it