Hey nice poem- thanks for posting it because i enjoyed it, hehe
If you could, please check out some of my poems, preferebly If I
Appreciated- Truely Spoken

"You and me are meant to be,
like the stars are meant to shine."

I love those two lines. It was a great way to start. You were a bit repetitive with the whole "we are meant to be," but all in all, it had a strong message. Overall, I give you a 4/5. It was a good poem. You have great potential, keep writing!!

~BJ~

Nice poem!! I didnt like how repetitive you were with the "we are meant to be". Overall Igive it a 4/5!! A few of the rhmes seeemed force other then that great poem!! Keep it up!!

"Fates brought us together"

I think that should be "fate's brought..." I like the poem i understand how your feel. To improve it you could try altering the layout so it is a bit more even - it makes it easier to read and gives the poem a better flow. Take care,
- Polly