Soul

by David   Jun 19, 2006


If only you knew the pain I was feeling,
Having them come and strip away my feelings,
Leaving only the bad ones; pain, suffering, greave and so on,
Having to stand there while they tare me apart,
Feeling them rip and feeling them pull,
Having them tare apart my soul into all those threads,
So little amount of me left only falling down and spinning away,
Having to fall forever more with only pain and suffering to accompany my fall.

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  • 18 years ago

    by x... LittleNicky ...x

    Deep, very deep... Alot of feeling in this poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Black Rose

    5/5 honey you can write better than me :)