A beautiful nonet and i loved the way it oozed simplicity and love

A style I have not seen much so that makes a nice change. Are "you" and "knew" meant to rhyme? Either way its a nice touch.

I really enjoy the "nonet" style. It is a very difficult style to convey a message in and also catch the readers attention. I, myself, enjoy the challenge of rhyming throughout nonets, but your message was conveyed very well throughout this poem. It grabbed me and didn't let go until the end. Nice piece!!! 5/5

Your nonet told a story, very important but very hard for some to do. Though the imagery was there, and it was, the thing that stood out the most was the red string as though you and this person were connected to the point that when you met the string would tighten to reveal the one you would be destined with.

Simply yet very effective in a great unusual style well done

Awww.. that is so beautiful and sweet at the same time! excellent write.. it really touched me.. the syllable counts are all right and i couldn't find anything wrong with grammer or spelling.. very good job! 5/5

Now I know what you meant ages ago about that string of fate thing lol.

This was a good nonet though. There's not much else to say really.. It's hard to comment on nonets. But I liked the choice of wording. I thought that was good. But I can't pick a favorite line. Cause I liked them all. *scratches head* Hmm.. 5/5 =) Tehe.

`Taleee. xx.

Hey this ones great too.. now this reli fits in love poems.. well-executed nonet..

in comparison to the other one, this has a more personal touch to it.. like, u only presented the "you-and-her" aspect as opposed to the more "public" view u gave in the other poem.. hmm wat else? the other one brings out the obsessive side in the writer (you) but this one is solely dealing with the fact that its just real love; mutual feelings..

well, i guess thats it.. i hope i got it ryt.. this is wat i understood from both ur poems.. both are great in their own way... but i personally prefer the other..

keep up the talent
take care
NannO

A very wonderfully written poem!! I've never heard of a nonet before..glad yours was the first =) I just hope you can keep that love that inspires you so much, adn if you ever lose it...write it down in poetry.

Best of Luck Always!
Bluesmiles

Once again. i think your amazing. i wisg the guys i fall in love with all the time would be as put together as you come out to be