"this pain is to much,"
'too' not 'to'
~~~
Reminds me of Romeo and Juliet, the sex scene before Romeo has to flee from fair Verona. Something about the lack of acceptance in society. Besides, there's that one line from the play where they say something about sin...like "let these lips sin once more" or something...

Great poem--makes you think bout how people can be so unaccepting---5/5

I could feel the pain, so descriptive well done 5/5

Beautifully written! Love your use of how you just yearn to be with this person not matter what the consequence! I can relate!