A hand to hold

by Kaylee   Jun 19, 2006


These words are imprinted,
I shake them from my mind,
Still not sure if I should speak,
The phantoms of my night,

I have two eyes yet I am blind,
To a promise unfulfilled,
With me are my own hands,
Not yet cleansed of filth,

Two legs with which I stand,
Cannot travel to my past,
These lips with which I talk,
Will not confess your sins,

I do not know the reasons,
Of why this had to be,
Nor how you had known,
How to haunt my dreams,

I have two eyes yet I am blind,
To a promise unfulfilled,
Let me speak this ache,
And have a hand to hold.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bhavin

    Its spooky... it kept my hooked till the very last word. nice poem. your poems are a great inspiration for aspiring poets like me... keep writing... enjoy...

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    This was a great poem! You write truly good poetry, with the imagery, metaphors, symbolism, flowing rhyme schemes...everything is perfect about the way you write, and I am in no fairly higher position than you to criticise any of it. 5/5 xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Elisa

    Any person with half a mind reading this poem would probaly say its great. im gonna tell you how it contributed to my feelings. it was amazing. talking about how great it truly is to hgave someone there for you. i absolutuly know that feeling. i also know how it feels to lose that person. keep in touch.

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Wonderful job, perfect ending

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥kazza♥

    Great oem, its really good to see great poetry like this

    kazza

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