Simple yet brilliant penned, very interesting!

Wow.. this was very good.. from the first line of the poem i was glued to it and i could not tear my eyes away! the rhymes work well and the descriptions made it exciting! i dont really understand the last two lines though, but that is probably jsut me.. excellent write! 5/5

The black widow spider, as you may know, gets its name because by its nature it consumes its mate I assume that since all black widows do this it is an innate behavior that can be compared to other natural instincts such as fear. The last lines were a personification of the spider. A spouse may kill a mate due to a natural reflex action brought on by various passions comparable to instinct and self-preservation. The first part of the poem was inspired by an actual event

Ooh, thank you, that makes so much more sense now! again ill say, truly excellent write! 5/5

I'm kind of confused, only b/c im dumb...but from what i udnerstood that was absolutely amazing, i really loved that parts, that i could comprehend! lol