This poem has such depth its really touching keep up the great work!!!

Hey, This is a beautiful poem, I love the idea of twisted sunshine
Thankyou so much for all your comments, I really appreciate it :)

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WOW!-best, BEST poem i've read in years!-so catching and and so real-just amazing, utterly amazing-im seriously at loss of words-brillant work, keep it up!-later-meg :]

Kool.weird.happy.sad.dark.light.hmmmmm.really weird but i like it! it's great! i dunno kno which one i like best SUICIDE SUICIDE or TWISTED SUNSHINE????? BOTH! :)

Nice rhyme. it was good. different and shorter, but good. Jpoet*