A Leaf's Descent

This is cool, very interesting write. I liked it a lot, your descriptions were great and the flow was too. Good work. Keep writing, always and forever....

Heh, you think humans are more tolerant of mortality? not what i would have expected : ). i'd agree with the hyphenating in the first line. or, "airborne," is a word, so you could use that instead, unless you were intending a sort of play on the word "born." but anyway, this is a good poem!

Wow. amazing yet again, i am glad you made new poems because i was running out for a while! gr8 work. loved it again. 5/5.

Lol.. this was good and it made me smile.. i like how you gave the leaves characteristics, it really added affect.. i also loved all the big words you used.. lol, very interesting! this flowed well and you created nice imagery.. good job! 5/5

First when I read this poem, I had to re-read it because I wasn't really sure what it meant. I agree with Sean that the first like should be hyphenated. It'd just look better like that. I couldn't help but think that this poem had an ambiguous meaning behind it, about mortality or something to that effect, especially after reading the last stanza for the second time and putting into context with the rest of the poem.