On the Edge

by SilenceBreaksTheHeart   Jun 19, 2006


In a corner a young girl sits
her fragile heart lays in bits.
Liquid sorrow on her cheeks
down her face the sadness leaks.
In her eyes you see a gleam
she sees life as a dream.
She's on the edge, she's on the brink
she can't find the missing link.
Over the edge madness lies
no one hears her soft little cries.
She's on the fringe, she's gonna fall
no one sees her demented smile.
There she goes, she's on her way down
she'll wear insanity like a crown.
No one's there, no one's around
to catch her before she hits the ground.
In a corner the young girl lays
there she'll stay the rest of her days.

Hey comment please...it means a lot. Thank You

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  • 17 years ago

    by Pyro (Carys)

    Outstanding, i know iv'e commented alot but yu deserve it, i find it amazing how yu can write so deeply and amzingly, i luv ur work, i envy yu, wish i cud write like yu =]

  • 18 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Wow! You had some AWESOME lines in here...and it was all worded very nicely. And thank you so much for you comment. I think that's the most praise I've gotten for one of my poems so thanks. I love it when I can describe how someone else feels, cause I know what it's like to read a poem and it's like they are describing you...anyways, your down as one of my fav's so keep it up girl!
    ~Jules

  • 18 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    Wow! that's kool. great poem and great rhymes! so detailed! ur a better poet than i am.

    ADRIAN

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥kHarIsMa♥

    WoW...i loved this poem...VERY well writtin...good job.. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Shan

    Hey omg ur poems r amazing too!!!thanks for all the comments you left me lol i've nvr had anyone like anything i wrote that much i dont think! and it means a lot too me lol but i think ur just as good as i am if not better!!

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