I reallly like this poem, and i like how you put emotions and things into something you can touch

i like these lines alot

Liquid sorrow on her cheeks
down her face the sadness leaks

&&

she'll wear insanity like a crown.

i look forward to reading more of your poems

Thats such a good poem it touched me very much, if u dont mind can i use

Liquid sorrow on her cheeks
down her face the sadness leaks.

In her eyes you see a g l e a m
she sees life as a dream.

thanx ily bye!

Hey this is really good keep doing more there excellent...

I love ur poem...it was very good...keep it up 5/5

I love ur poem...it was very good...keep it up 5/5

Hey omg ur poems r amazing too!!!thanks for all the comments you left me lol i've nvr had anyone like anything i wrote that much i dont think! and it means a lot too me lol but i think ur just as good as i am if not better!!

WoW...i loved this poem...VERY well writtin...good job.. 5/5

Wow! that's kool. great poem and great rhymes! so detailed! ur a better poet than i am.

ADRIAN

Wow! You had some AWESOME lines in here...and it was all worded very nicely. And thank you so much for you comment. I think that's the most praise I've gotten for one of my poems so thanks. I love it when I can describe how someone else feels, cause I know what it's like to read a poem and it's like they are describing you...anyways, your down as one of my fav's so keep it up girl!
~Jules

Outstanding, i know iv'e commented alot but yu deserve it, i find it amazing how yu can write so deeply and amzingly, i luv ur work, i envy yu, wish i cud write like yu =]