by Poetvoices Jun 19, 2006
category :
Fun, humor /
about society
The battle paint is put on. |
by brkendown
You have good potental in your writing! |
OK that was funny football season I was imaginging something totally different this is awsome 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine |
by Ruthie
He he that was so cute sis! I loved i! great beginning! :D *hugs* |
by Jaime
Haha, gotta love surprise endings. I like this, it's got a good flow to it as well which a lot of the poems in this category seem to lack. |