Safety pin

by tomuchhurt   Jun 19, 2006


Safety Pin
By: Kamille 4/5/06

PLEASE VOTE AND I WILL RETURN THE FAVOR!!!

Yelling, screaming, shouting like mad,
Punishing me and making me sad.
The safety pins calling come get me I cut,
While in the back round your screaming my daughters a $lut!
I walk to the deliverer of pain,
There it is calling my name,
Knowing in my heart the pity and shame.
I pick it up,
Check the door its shut.
Sit on my bed,
Blood is shed.
Hurting inside,
So many feelings I hide.
The cut shows well,
Red fire of hell.
I hope the cut someone will see,
So they can realize all my anger and misery.
The weapon of temptation,
That haunts the nation.
How could this little piece of tin,
Cause so much heartache and sin?
Its the devils weapon of choice,
For teens everywhere who have no voice.

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  • 18 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Hmm .. I like the way you have written this.. It is quite powerful.. I do wonder if cutting is a personal thing, and whether someone does it for their own torment, or for the attention of others seeing the marks, however, you almost answer this question in the poem. I feel the torment you feel when I read this, and for that alone, well done.. xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Amberinaa

    Good job.
    i loved the story
    it was so sad.
    But so many people can relate
    it's beautiful
    :D

  • 18 years ago

    by Dustin Strano

    I love it..*standing ovation*...and the ending is so true..I can feel this poem and saddened by how true it is that teens use that as an escape rather than expressing their feelings..

  • 18 years ago

    by samantha

    I love that poem i can really relate to it i wish i could write like that 5/5
    vsams

  • 18 years ago

    by Nelle

    Well, you were right I did enjoy it, it reminded me of mine and of me If this is true, i know the feeling and im glad someone understands where i'm coming from, b/c not many ppl do and it makes me soo mad! but that's a different story, great write!!!

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