Awsome poem 5/5 perfect

Hey.. i really loved this poem and i can definetly relate to it.. 5/5.. just perfect!
-trista

Wow
i am new to this but you have inspired me too write more poems
i realli like how descriptive your poem is
i hope you like my poems because i really like yours :)

Oh wow... that was sad. youre right, i did like it! great poem 5/5 and thanx for the comment!

ARP

Yeah I can see why its your favourite, I am from New Zealand and we have one of the highest rates of teen suicide in the world so its very close to home. Keep up the good writing :)

Wow, thats an excellent poem, it really expresses ur feelings and the uncontrollable way to release them. very sad tho, take care hun,
xxEmmaxxx

Wow
I love the ending
Thanks for the comment
This poem is lovely
Gread reccomendation =D
Keep it up
x

Well, you were right I did enjoy it, it reminded me of mine and of me If this is true, i know the feeling and im glad someone understands where i'm coming from, b/c not many ppl do and it makes me soo mad! but that's a different story, great write!!!

I love that poem i can really relate to it i wish i could write like that 5/5
vsams

I love it..*standing ovation*...and the ending is so true..I can feel this poem and saddened by how true it is that teens use that as an escape rather than expressing their feelings..

Good job.
i loved the story
it was so sad.
But so many people can relate
it's beautiful
:D

Hmm .. I like the way you have written this.. It is quite powerful.. I do wonder if cutting is a personal thing, and whether someone does it for their own torment, or for the attention of others seeing the marks, however, you almost answer this question in the poem. I feel the torment you feel when I read this, and for that alone, well done.. xx