Dear daddy

by lexie   Jun 20, 2006


I wish you were here,
i wish you still cared,
daddy,why'd you have to go and hurt us,
why'd they make you leave,
i want you to come back,
daddy i miss you,
i cant even remember what you look like,
they say I'm the spinning image of you,
but i guess I'll never know,
cuz daddy you had to let us all down,
and then you moved away,
leaving me here,
to deal with her and everything else,
so go on right ahead,
and drink your life away,
I'll still be here,
waiting for you to come home,
daddy i miss you,
and i want you to know,
daddy,i love you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Aww.. that was sweet.. but i kinda felt it was missing that x-factor.. if you know what i mean.. like the emotion was partly there, but not really strong enough.. im not sure.. it was still pretty good..

    they say I'm the spinning image of you,
    ^ here, i dont think "spinning" is the right word.. isn't it "spitting" lol..

    good job, ill give it a 4/5! :)

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