Aww.. that was sweet.. but i kinda felt it was missing that x-factor.. if you know what i mean.. like the emotion was partly there, but not really strong enough.. im not sure.. it was still pretty good..

they say I'm the spinning image of you,
^ here, i dont think "spinning" is the right word.. isn't it "spitting" lol..

good job, ill give it a 4/5! :)