Sad eyes

by lexie   Jun 20, 2006


I look at you with my sad eyes,
i watch you and i wonder,
how you cannot know,
how you just walk right by,
and dont notice my pain,
you call me friend,
and say you understand,
but you just tell me what i want to hear,
wont you just tell me the truth,
and stop all this pretending,
you ask if everythings alright,
and then you seem to care,
but you dont know,
how deep this pain runs,
you've only touched the surface,
and it seems to much for you to handle,
if only you knew the truth,
if only you could understand

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  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    Lots of places where apostrophes are necessary, like in the word "don't". Also lack of capitalizing the word "I", is that on purpose?

    Very emotional poem and probably something that a lot of people can relate to. I don't know how many people I have in my life that ask if I'm ok but really only want to hear "yes" because "no" would mean they'd have to hear why.

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    This was kay but not exactly great. Had been something that...was different from what I usually read. Good thing. The ending did end on a strong note but a little....not really interesting in the middle. But it gives a better aspect on something.
    ~Faith-less

  • 18 years ago

    by holly

    Very sad but a beautiful poem which i can definately relate too! xxALLYXX

  • 18 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Good poem----5/5 you have a lot of talent!

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This dark poem really hits its mark yet sheds light on the darkness

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