This dark poem really hits its mark yet sheds light on the darkness

Good poem----5/5 you have a lot of talent!

Very sad but a beautiful poem which i can definately relate too! xxALLYXX

This was kay but not exactly great. Had been something that...was different from what I usually read. Good thing. The ending did end on a strong note but a little....not really interesting in the middle. But it gives a better aspect on something.
~Faith-less

Lots of places where apostrophes are necessary, like in the word "don't". Also lack of capitalizing the word "I", is that on purpose?

Very emotional poem and probably something that a lot of people can relate to. I don't know how many people I have in my life that ask if I'm ok but really only want to hear "yes" because "no" would mean they'd have to hear why.