Distance (Triolet)

by Melissa S. Masucci   Jun 20, 2006


I miss you more than words can say,
Love you more than my heart could show.
Can't a visit last one more day?
I miss you more than words can say.
How can you stand living this way,
With pain I never hoped to know.
I miss you more than words can say,
Love you more than my heart could show.

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A Triolet is a poetic form consisting of only 8 lines. Within a Triolet, the 1st, 4th, and 7th lines repeat, and the 2nd and 8th lines do as well. The rhyme scheme is simple: ABaAabAB, capital letters representing the repeated lines. Make each line 8 syllables in length.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Mousie

    Very good... i had never heard of that type of poem, but it seems challenging... wonderful job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Mousie

    Very good... i had never heard of that type of poem, but it seems challenging... wonderful job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Rain

    5/5 for doing something very complicated and doing very well at it! yay, i learned somehting today!

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Melissa -- This was great! I wasn`t familiar with triolets until I read your little definition of them. This was great, it held a lot of emotion. Great job!
    5/5

    Samantha Hollywood

  • 18 years ago

    by not a poet

    Beautiful form poetry!

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