Comments : Distance (Triolet)

  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    I believe you set out what you wished to accomplish. Good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Brad Champagne

    I love you, too, cutie. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    This is a cool kind of poem and you are really good at writing this kind! It is perfect and flows really well. The emotion you put into it shows and makes the poem deeper---5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Kara !

    I'm impressed. That's was a rather difficult one to pull of, and you did it well.

    Great work. x

  • 18 years ago

    by not a poet

    Beautiful form poetry!

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Melissa -- This was great! I wasn`t familiar with triolets until I read your little definition of them. This was great, it held a lot of emotion. Great job!
    5/5

    Samantha Hollywood

  • 18 years ago

    by Rain

    5/5 for doing something very complicated and doing very well at it! yay, i learned somehting today!

  • 18 years ago

    by Mousie

    Very good... i had never heard of that type of poem, but it seems challenging... wonderful job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Mousie

    Very good... i had never heard of that type of poem, but it seems challenging... wonderful job 5/5