I love it, u really bring somethign else to poetry u bring out a different veiw from words and situations that i would never think of its really somthing xox sam

Hey huni this was a powerful piece.

'as i am the one alone
waiting for the last train to hell
sitting beside a new born
devil drowning in a wishin well'

Absolutely remarkable!!! How do you come up with such lines I wonder. I just loved this poem. Nothing else to say. You keep them coming.

Love
Michelle

OMG... are u planning to make me drown in pain again??? hehe... all ur poems are sooo deep.. they make me feel the sorrows right down to my soul.. this was just marvelous.... i really can't explain what it made me feel... every line, every word was just perfect.... soo beautifully written....

Much love,
Ipsita

H0ly crap!! thats beautiful!!! i l0ve it !! keep it up!
l0ve always
aLi

Real Good Poem!!

Absolutely brilliant poem, flawless imagery i loved it .x.

I really like this poem. The way you put it togethers is wonderful. You're very talented.

I wish i was that good you prick lol

Very good poem, I loved it, 5/5 keep up the good work!

Omg
Simply Magnificent.

Very talented much?

haha

keep it up!

love,

tina

"if life is meant to breakdown
then forever let my knees kiss the ground"

I liked that image, it was so sad but kind of beautiful at the same time if you get what i mean.
I don't phrase my thoughts very well, lol.
Geat overall as usual ;)
5/5
*Gem*

Another great poem ! The words you have used in this piece just bring it to life. The sadness is really very deep in this write.Take Care Your Friend Cindy

This is an awesome write!

if life is meant to breakdown
then forever let my knees kiss the ground
if from me love is all you expect
then wail till silent agony makes a sound

Love the word choices and imagery in this one!

Wow! Such deep intense feeling in this poem.

if life is meant to breakdown
then forever let my knees kiss the ground
if from me love is all you expect
then wail till silent agony makes a sound

Excellent job!
Take Care LOve Cindy

Nitin
What can I say but WOW! This is really sad and depressing. The imagery is wonderful as are the word choices.

with the sign of a demon on my head
and a piece of holybook in my pocket
i play hide and seek on the land of dead
i die every night and with sunrise i forget

This stanza is so dark and sad. Really hits right in the heart.
~CLAP~CLAP~CLAP~
Love Cindy