What Was Once Ours

by BlueEyedMystery   Jun 20, 2006


I sit on my roof,
Gazing at the stars,
I'm thinking of you,
And what was once ours.

I pull my jacket closer,
As a lonely tear falls,
I see a flash of lightening,
And hear the wolves calls.

I miss the way you talked,
I miss the way you cared,
I miss the way you whispered,
"I will always be there."

I wished on a shining star,
That you would come back,
Everything would be the same,
And my heart wouldn't be cracked.

I close my eyes defeated,
Cause deep in my heart I know,
That will never happen,
Because you don't love me anymore.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    I think this poems really good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Aww... this was so very sad...
    some how i can feel what the writter is feeling... i can feel every pain... ...

    its because you have written it so well

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    I loved the first stanza, in parcitularly the last line. the third stanza was also very clever, with ech line beginning the same.
    i very well written piece

    Ruby

  • 18 years ago

    by Theo

    Hey i kinda like this poem. ive been in love but ive never had my heart broken so it makes your poem interesting to read. hang in there.
    [Theo]

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Awww. That was sad. Really goog though.

    I liked how you said you wished on a star. It was cool.

    Again, I don't see anything that needs to be changed in this. It was a great write! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

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