I read this n thought of my best m8 its a 100% true so if u dnt mind i wil send it 2 her as it made me cry reading it. you are well good at righting keep it up ya
lv dug
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Hi!! I finished my other poem you wanted to read!!

kk, corrections, if you don't mind =)

first stanza, last line : tare to tear
fourth stanza. last line : your to you're

otherwise, I really like this one! I can relate! great job hun! < 3 Ciao