by amy Jun 20, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
My life so far the way i feel the way i live the everyday it hurts to live.Sometimes i cry and cry all night sometimes i smile the whole day throughout.But today im down feel like i wanna walk out but i gotta be strong just for me mum.No one knows the pain i feel when i look at u babe just before you leave i wanna give up or just really shout i wanna be home somewhere i belong |
by K
Great poem, easy to relate to and understandable. You should consider line breaks or stanzas. It makes it that much easier to read. Keep it up : ) |