Memory

by χ-я.ι.α-χ   Jun 20, 2006


I remember it as if it was yesterday.
The shimmering shiny sun was high.
Water-balloons were flying all over the place,
Like missiles, flying right past my face.
Then getting hit, harder than ever,
Feeling the water trickle down my side.
The screechy sound of splashing balloons
Fill the atmosphere as well as the kids screaming.
Finally getting hold of a balloon in my hands
And throwing it, watching it soar in the air,
And then seeing it finally hit the target.
Splash!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robyn

    Hey ria i really like thsi one it talks about summer and how much fun it really is lol good times great poem keep it up :)
    take care
    xoxo
    robyn

  • 18 years ago

    by vika

    Hey ria! gr8 poem! how long hav u been writin poems from! the poem is relli descriptive! nice! wud like 2 read more! keep up the gr8 work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Aww.. hehe! that sounds so fun! how come i wasn't there? :P great write, the descriptions were very vivid and it flowed well.. the only problem i could find was here :

    Water-balloons were flying right past my face,
    Like missiles, flying right past my face.
    ^ i dont think you should say "flying right past my face" it ruins the effect..

    great write though! 5/5

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