Drowning life

by Nicole   Jun 20, 2006


Life my life may not be as bad as someone elses. but the life i have had isnt very encouraging.
i am drowning in a sea of depression with no life jacket

where is the person who will save me from myself
i guess they are no where

friends became backstabbers
loneliness became my shield
boys were never there
parents can't approach them either

guess its on me to sink and drown
or float for a bit longer

sorry i aint going into much detail about me people its just hard to talk about whats wrong to anyone

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sammib

    Very nicely written indeed. Nice style and nice idea. Suggestion is you know you are holding back... break through and your writting will be even better... talking about your problems is not a sign of weakness, its a decision you make to allow ppl to share your life with them. Share Nicole. Its what we are created for.

    Godbless
    Sammib

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Wow...great job...love it..i like the compairison (i so spelt that wrong lol) but w.e keep it up hun...best of luck adn wishes
    XOx Laura Marie aka Sweets

  • 18 years ago

    by Shelby

    I think you are great personally i love how u compair w/ life + u n a boat

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