I think you are great personally i love how u compair w/ life + u n a boat

Wow...great job...love it..i like the compairison (i so spelt that wrong lol) but w.e keep it up hun...best of luck adn wishes
XOx Laura Marie aka Sweets

Very nicely written indeed. Nice style and nice idea. Suggestion is you know you are holding back... break through and your writting will be even better... talking about your problems is not a sign of weakness, its a decision you make to allow ppl to share your life with them. Share Nicole. Its what we are created for.

Godbless
Sammib