Ice Heart

by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS   Jun 20, 2006


If you were supposed to be with me
If I thought there, you would always be
I’m sorry then, I expected too much from you
I made a mistake of that i'm sure
I trusted… when nobody else would.

I won’t believe in your words anymore
You finally succeeded in your mission
So run away while I lay on the floor
Cross mountains, go to the furthest hole
And hide behind the door, that’s locked

I don’t need to see you crying
I don’t ask for revenge
But I pray every night
Please never let him hurt me again

Keep him far away; close my eyes when he appears
Deafen my ears when his voice gets near
And protect this heart, which became ice
Every time a memory crosses my mind.

Because now coward, it’s too late to mend an ice-heart
Now don’t ask if I am afraid,because that answer is what hurts…

...[Well i needed to write about it...!So if you read the poem id love to read what you think about it and if you think there is any way to improve my work, thanks!]

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by x3ForeverCanHappenx3

    This was amazing.. i completely understand what you are saying in it. you have so much passion and emotion in it. i love it. nice job..

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    This was good.. the emotion was strong and clear.. and it flowed pretty well..

    Deaf my ears when his voice gets near
    ^ change it to "deafen"

    i am pretty sure there were a few other mistakes.. but, im sorry, you'll have to check them yourself.. nice job! 5/5