Melissa your one of the few poets I never mind reading from. You have so much beauty and deepness to your words and I would like very much to write as you do one day.

The stark reality of your poetry belies the feelings inside. I LOVE your poetry and have missed reading it.

Heavy-hearted write... Your words are real and pack serious emotion. Powerful poetry, wonderfully done!

This is outstanding, just what I've come to expect from you. There's so much I could say about this but I'm still lost in the magic of this piece....

"but fiction licks the trusty air"

"And I'm trying to paint black and white memories
with crusted bristles of despair;"

I adore those lines, just wow!
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Neon stars hold many truths,
but fiction licks the trusty air
[That line stood out to me, it was great.]

This whole poem was wow. I loved it. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

That was so beautiful and it's exactly how I feel. I loved it! It was so well written, good choice of words, it flowed perfectly, and I don't have anything else to say about it...lovely poem.
Great
5/5
Breanna

Breath-taking in so many ways.This reminds me so much of my peice 'And Always I dream Alone'-the same sentiments, emotions, thoughts, it's uncanny.I know this feeling.You express this so well, every image is a feeling.Fantastically written and communicated.It cannot but touch the soul of any reader who has ever felt this, and we all have.
Best to you,
Gary Jurechka

I like it! Cool poem. Atmosphere is excellent and imagery is fantastic. 5/5

Very well writen it holds a lot of meaning to it 5/5 <33

Wow... just Wow, wonderful poem. It is so touching, unique and emotional. I enjoy reading it, you created excellent and very original atmosphere. Every line is very effective and this piece deserves 5/5