Secrets

by Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ   Jun 20, 2006


*Secrets*(1st poem)

My thoughts are hidden
hidden inside
i trust no one with my secret
my secret to die
i live my life in the dark
nobody notices me
I'm just another depressed teenager
can anybody see?
i wear black
and walk with my head down
does anybody care about my permanent frown?
I'm going crazy here by myself
and I'm giving up on how to try
why not just stop all the madness
and watch myself die?
watch myself die
a death so gory
and all i wanted
was someone to listen to my sad story....

*please rate/comment me this is my first poem*

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  • 18 years ago

    by wish123

    Omg i loved it i relate so much well except dying! but everything else i totally relate! ---

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow... your poems really remind me of my own life!

    great poem once again

  • 18 years ago

    by Jelz;; Oh,KillMeFast

    Sadly, this is exactly like me

    IN THIS PART

    ;I'm just another depressed teenager
    [can] anybody see?
    i wear black;

    I think you should change the ' can' to a ' can't ' . it would rhyme better, and in makes more scense

    GOOD JOB :)

  • 18 years ago

    by eric

    That is a great poem. i feel the same way.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah

    I know where your coming from I'm truely sorry, your not alone.

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