I Need You

by Kristina   Jun 20, 2006


Do you love me?
Or am I standing alone in the dark?
I want to feel you near me,
But you're so far away.

I need your embrace,
I need to see your face.
I love you so much,
You're all that I need.

I want you near me,
Right by my side,
To wipe away the tears,
That I cry.

If only you loved me,
Like you use to,
We'd be perfect together,
Just me and you.

Copyright © April 22, 2006 - Kristina M

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    You rhyme some of the time, but not others. You also don't really have a set rhythm for the poem. I'd suggest either rhyming more consistantly, or making a rhythm scheme. That'd make everything flow a bit better, and improve the poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    I really liked it. I can relate to it a lot. There was a lot of emotion in it, and the flow was good. Keep up the good work.

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