Very well written.....i enjoyed it.......the best part about poerty is when you can FEEL the persons emoctions......I felt your and you are amazing..... 5/5 with out a dought......

Superb.

Wow Shan, i havent been on for long, bt it shows how much i have missed writing and read poems. I luv ur reading ur poems, real inspirational, can't w8 to c more
Thanks for painting me a picture :)
All My Love
TheUNSEENChild
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Loz