I think this poem had good content, such as wording and vocabulary. But some of your lines ran short, and some ran long, so I would suggest going through it again and making it a little more clear for the reader. I also think that on your second stanza, you should consider adding another line, maybe a rhyming one. I don`t really understand why all of your stanzas had for lines, but this one had three.
Another thing I would keep in mind is your rhyming. As I well know some poems don`t rhyme, you seem to be confused at whether or not you want yours to rhyme. I infer this only because half of your poem rhymes well and the other half doesn`t rhyme at all.
But overall, nice job. Keep up the good work and take my advice into consideration. 4/4.

I thought it was a throw off having the 2nd verse only have 3 lines, while the rest had 4. You need to add a line to it. Maybe add at the end of it "Maybe you should leave"

Overall another good poem. Keep writing, you'll get better.
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I didn't really understand this.. i found that it did not really make sense.. it was sweet though..

But, yet you have to go through the same
^ take out "but" it doesn't make sense..

nice job, 4/5

Good poem. I thought you did a really good job. Keep it up.