Very good

Thanks im only 12 and i love writing poems and i love to hear my poems r good

Your only twelve. wow. that takes of knowledge to right a poem that deep, well then again i'm only 13.i liked it~ 5/5, i like your style of writing, keep writing, would you please check out my poems. Luv ya's
~janean~

W0w thats really g00d!! keep writing! thanks f0r the c0mment!! i'll always return in fav0r!
l0ve always
aLi