You poem was alright but i'm not to sure if it quite deserves the rating it got. Where you said ....crying dry, And... it breaks up your poem and makes the viewer a bit hesetant. Have fun.... ME xox

OI got a pretty good idea from th poem how you felt at the time of this write. Again you have let loose an emotion that most can relate to...but hide their depreession and feelings of uselessness away so that no others can tell they feel lijw that.
Many ppl fall under the spell of the knife..sad but true.
Yiou have conveyed these feeling very well in this write!!

OMG SOOOOO GOOD!
5/5

Well, i can honestly say i understand completely...I can relate alot alot to this!! It was a awesome piece, it really made me think about myself!! great job 5/5

Wow. This is difficult Natalie. I'm trying to figure it out, but it is hard, this one.
"But roll up my sleeve, you will see the signs."
So the character has been cutting. Maybe she'd stopped, and is now on a relapse. Or, more probably, she's being getting worse and worse, and is finally out of denial, admitting what she's been doing, and is begging for help.
"..Cause I think I've lost control."
I love that ending. I'd love to hear more people say that - it's admiting, accepting, and pleeding all in one sentance.

Great work. x