Swimming
by Jordanna Jun 20, 2006
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Im swimming in a river of blood, as all my pains slip away all my dreams come true as I realize I've stabbed myself and drounded in a river of blood. |
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18 years ago
I liked it al0t!! i think it w0uld have been perfect if y0u added a little bit m0re details in that st0ry 0therwise g00d j0b! l00k at s0me 0f mine t00!
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18 years ago
It was short, but i liked it, Smile Beautiful, comments are for critisism or encouragement, maybe you could emphysize why she lost you and you could help the person improve ~4/5
