Comments : Swimming

  • 18 years ago

    by WakeboardxChick

    It was short, but i liked it, Smile Beautiful, comments are for critisism or encouragement, maybe you could emphysize why she lost you and you could help the person improve ~4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Y0URMY0NLYH0PE

    I liked it al0t!! i think it w0uld have been perfect if y0u added a little bit m0re details in that st0ry 0therwise g00d j0b! l00k at s0me 0f mine t00!
    l0ve always aLi