I hear you approach, your weightless tread
While I lie here in this lonely bed
Where are my friends, where are my family?
Oh why have they left and forsaken me?
"Because dear flower you can't keep up"
"Since dear flower you can't hold your cup"
"Because dear flower you can't think straight"
"Since dear flower you can't always wait"
Despite all this they could still be here
All I wanted was to be held near
Oh but why could they not even try?
All I wanted was to say goodbye
"Dear flower although no child has weeped"
"Dear flower you still must be reaped"
"Dear flower your time is at last nigh"
"Dear flower you have heaved your last sigh"
Thats very good. i relaly like it. it has tonz of emotion put in it. its deep. i think it flows veyr well and eveyrhting. keep on writing
take care
luve angie