I think you meant 'honesty' instead of 'honestly' Not sure.

But I thought this was great. Was a little long, But you did keep me interested, which is a good thing. =)

The rhyming was pretty good aswell. I didn't seem to forced. The flow was alright. But I really liked your wording. It made it more interesting. Keep it up =) 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Hey this is a really awsome poem, you are a really great writer. yea it was only a little but long but i find longer, better. but really good work kepp it up 5/5

sarahxxx