Wow this is really good. I like the metaphor that you had going on (at least I think you did, I hope so) but either way, i saw a metaphor in it. Like a person is the flower.. The rain/cloud is maybe a problem in their life. Yep, great job on this :)

Hey thnx for the r/c on mine. i cant look at love poems cuz my pc, so this is the closest. i really like this, it was very descriptive i liked that. it was a an all around gr8 poem, i liked this a lot.