What do I do?

by littlballa   Jun 20, 2006


Each day you cross my mind
and you told me to trust you
and now time is tricking me
i am starting to believe your words
i don't want to trust you
but something makes me
because i still love you
you're far away right now
but when you come back i know
i know that you want it to be the same
you want everything to go back to how it was
and inside i want that too
but this time i dont want to be blue

*i just quickly wrote this poem, its kinda rough

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  • 18 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Ok...here goes. It wasnt one of my favorite poems, but it was good. You were right when you put at the bottom that it was a little rough. You would easily be able to fix this by spending more time working on it. The idea of it I love its just...hmmm...it doent feel done. I think it would be a lot better if you added to it and revised some of the wording. Overall I like it though! 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Beautiful poem, heartfelt words. I really understand your feelings here. It hits me hard because I can relate. Great job!

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