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by RetroRavey   Jun 20, 2006


You melt away...
Into a nothing I can't find.
You make me feel...
Like I have a heart.

You've shattered this cold,
That I never knew how to escape.
You let me live,
Basking in your warmth.
We could've stayed in the darkness,
Forever a part of something...
Forever together.
But you needed more,
Then just complacency,
You needed joy...
Something I did not know.
But you opened the door,
To which you were the key,
And led me to a place
I didn't know existed.
You held me close,
And told me not to fear,
For you knew I was scared,
Of leaving the dark
And becoming part of something new.
Something bright and unimaginable.
You made me warm,
And I smiled for the first time.
You saved me,
When I didn't know...
That I needed to be saved.

You make me feel...
Like I have the heart
That you say was in me...
All along.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Dammit i commented twice. argh! 3 times now! oh well, ur gain : D lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    The repetition of teh first stanza as the last was very effective. i enjoyed reading this in every essence and gladly give u 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Very good, I loved it, 5/5 keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    BEAUTIFUL write and nice formatting. Excellent. Really inspiring poem in many different ways.
    5/5

    As always~ Kate

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aw.. I love this poem. It's so amazing how certain people can change you for the better. The flow and rhythm of this was really good and I like the whole meaning behind it. The opening stanza really worked well for this as did the closing. 5/5*