by RetroRavey Jun 20, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
You melt away... |
Dammit i commented twice. argh! 3 times now! oh well, ur gain : D lol |
The repetition of teh first stanza as the last was very effective. i enjoyed reading this in every essence and gladly give u 5/5 |
Very good, I loved it, 5/5 keep up the good work! |
BEAUTIFUL write and nice formatting. Excellent. Really inspiring poem in many different ways. |
by Bridgette
Aw.. I love this poem. It's so amazing how certain people can change you for the better. The flow and rhythm of this was really good and I like the whole meaning behind it. The opening stanza really worked well for this as did the closing. 5/5* |