I loved this poem.
excellent job!

I found this poem to be beautiful...its so true that life can be as unfair as to make it impossible to be with the one u really love....this was a great work..

Hey, that was great! really heartfelt. I loved it and it was really easy to relate to. And such tru words. It would be great if you could comment on some of my poems, particulaly red raindrops, but any that you like. thanks. :)