This is it

by Nelle   Jun 20, 2006


Ok, this is where it ends
The days go on
And my love will be strong
My heart is broke and the tears will always fall

Starting over is not an option
Going forward is not easy
Staying strong is a hard task
And keeping alive is getting hard

I don't wanna do this anymore
I don't wanna be the one to hurt you
I don't like seeing you cry
Most of all I don't like seeing you fall

Things will change, and you will grow
My heart will go out to you
But you will never know,
That my love for you was always real

This is not just about now
This will not be the saddest thing ever
This will not be a tragedy
But it will be my destiny

I need to see where I'm at
I need to know what I'm doing is right
Until, i do my heart will be broke
And This fight, Will soon take my life

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    I like this line:

    My heart is broke and the tears will always fall

    I also like the second stanza, I think it describes well, why weere you feeling the way you did.

    The last stanza, was just perfect, specially the last line...it's true. Sometimes a problem can make us want to give up.

    XoXo
    Gaby

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Aww.. this was good.. the flow was okay.. and your descriptions were nicely done.. there was a little emotion but nothing that straight away hit me.. i am sorry if i am being blunt on all these comments, but i am tired.. nice job though.. 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Hmm, this one was pretty good. I liked it. The flow and rhythm was good.

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