Crushed

by gone back to him   Jun 20, 2006


This is a poem by my friend Akiri. She is Japanese and wasn't too sure if people would like it, so i am testing it for her!

I couldn't look you in the eyes, when you asked me how I felt.
I couldn't tell you the truth, when you said "I know something's wrong."
I guess then i thought it was right,
to hide what i felt for you.
That you never loved me too.
Untill that day when you were gone.
I went to your house, my words all worked out.
Then I saw a moving van, pulling out from your house.
I guess then I thought it was right,
to hide what I felt from you.
but now I\'m not so sure.
There were many times I could have said \"I love you\"
But I didn\'t.
And now that you\'re gone...
What\'s left for me to do?
I sit and cry,
and feel alone.
Because of one stupid mistake
I made of not saying thoes three litte words that mean \"I love you\"

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  • 17 years ago

    by bacha

    Lovely ... wonderfull.. nice:):)

    iloved it for sure:):)
    girl keep it up:):)

    khuloodan:))
    smile all the time:):)

  • 18 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Japanese or not that was awesome. She is a great writer. 5/5
    -Kakashi

  • 18 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    Beautiful poem!Sad but touching! I really liked it so tell your friend to keep writing like that!=)
    xx

    (...TILLmyLASTtearFALLS...)

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