Him...

by kelS;   Jun 20, 2006


Why do I need him?
He doesn`t need me.
Hes off on his own.
Without me.
And with her.
It doesn`t make sense.
Can`t i just be over him?
I didn`t even want him
Till i heard of her.
I can`t still need him.
I can`t still want him.
We weren`t even dating.
We didn`t even have anything between us.
But just me hearing.
That he kissed her.
Made me die.
So just take me away.
Let me go.
Kill me now.
So i can leave this place.
And be rid of you.

* heres this free verse poem!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    I like free verse for some reason.
    There is so limits to it sort of thing.
    But I liked your poem right here!
    I like this because I'm going through this right now hehe.
    And a poem that people can relate to is a good one!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    This is an honest poem, it says what you really think and what you really want. It's also well written and clear.

    XoXo
    Gaby

  • 18 years ago

    by Krissey

    FOr a free verse..not bad! I liked how you just spit out what you were feeling and didn't hold back! nicely said..well written!
    -Krissey!

  • 18 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    I thought this was oooookay! There just seemed to be something missing........I dunno! Sorry1

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    I though that was a fair poem.. it didn't really have much emotion.. although, the flow was good.. i think if you add in more of how you feel about it then it will be better.. and maybe use better descriptive words..

    Tt doesn`t make sense.
    ^ should be "It" not "Tt"

    Till i herd of her.
    ^ should be "heard" not "herd"

    We didn`t even have a thing.
    ^ dont use the word "thing", try and use another word as this is far too random and not a very poetic word..

    nice try though! ill give it a 3/5 :)

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