A beautiful, powerful piece of work that definitley deserves a place on the front page.

we each may not be able to change this world you are talking about - but we can make a difference. thanks for sharing this with us.

peace
shobhana

Wow i like that good job

WOW!!!!
That poem hopefully reaches out to everyone who suffers from problems like at the end or just love poetry....
i am so inspired by that
P.S GR8 POEM

Love always: Nicole xoxoxoxoxoxoxo

My Comment Was Wrote Wrong lol

Its Supposed To Say:

Its The Sorta Poem That Cannot Be Written With Out Experiancing The Sort Of Pain Or Anguish Of This Situation, The Poem Is Written In My Eyes From The Heart, If You Have Not Been In That Sort Of Volitile Situation Then You Are A Very Compasinate Person With Extream Understanding FOr Other Peoples Suffering, All In All The Poems Amazing And Made Me Cry

Hopefully That Comments A Bit Easier To Understand

You are so right, I work with these kids
They need people like you ! Keep writing for them.
Deana

Oh thats a beautiful poem. u have showen so much emotion. i love it.
love willow xxoo

Wow.... no wonder you won the contest. All I have to say is that's amazing. I loved it. Absolutely loved it.

This one made so much sense to me....I have both seen kids like this...and I was once one! Beautifully worded!

A awakener

...Gr£at p0Em...

Great Poem man.. I liked it

Excellent poem.. Very well expressed.

Beautiful, Touching, and shines a light onto one of the World's biggest problems.
I sponsor a child (hense ur part on poverty) but that's one out of so many more. I'm only 14. It's only $36 a month...I don't struggle to keep up.
I provide fresh water for an entire community. I provide education and agricultural skills. If everyone gave up just a bit of money, imagine the change. Then again, i used the word Imagine. we shouldn't have to imagine this kind of thing we should know it's there and true. The only true thing about it is that the poverty is.

I'm not getting on my knees and begging everyone, I'm emphasising part of the poem.
If this world is so full of love we can show it by caring.
God Bless
xx

Oh my god.. That is amazing... Your best by far... And it spoke to me so much because I can relate so well... It sent a chill through my body. Excellent job, Noni!

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

This was a great poem! It really told how life is like! All kids should be treated with respect they shouldn't be scared all the time! It was very sad but explained a lot! 5/5! Great job! {*LACEY*}

This was a great poem! It really told how life is like! All kids should be treated with respect they shouldn't be scared all the time! It was very sad but explained a lot! 5/5! Great job! {*LACEY*}

Now in my opinion i think that was an awesome poem.it showed all the suffering the children of the world go through.i like that. i love it when little children suffer.we cant get enough of little kids suffering.thank you.that made me so happy i love it wen kids suffer.it opened my eyes 2 all the suffering children and made me wanna give an abortion.

I like this. It's different from the things I usually read. I voted a 4 becuse I think you could have gotten your point across a little stronger. But I still really like it, it makes you think, which is what good writing is all about, but don't take my word for it, I'm kind of an amatuer :)

Very nice I like this one, its similar to one I wrote called world portrait feel free to comment on it or any other poem I'll really appreciate

I really love this poem i actually can relate to it