Comments : Br0ken AgAin!

  • 18 years ago

    by nina

    Hey i love this poem...theres no much emotion in it...its awsome...i used to feel the same way...but i got over the jerk who left me...and met sumone new....dont worry u will to!

  • 18 years ago

    by XxXWhisPerInDaStarsXxX

    Thanx nina for even reading my poetry xx i'll return the favour xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    I liked the whole message of your poem, it's really sincere, and I can understand what you are trying to communicate.
    If you want to improve this poem, or just any future poem, I think you should use some original words, uncommon ones, that'll add some originality to your poem and it will be more beautiful.

    Good job!

    Keep writing.