Good poem,i'm sure alot of people will be able to relate ,that is what is important in most cases,a poem that touches you

I really liked this poem, it's so sweet. It's very clear, and sad but cute. I loved the first stanza, it's well written and I love what it says. You described pretty well how does it feel to be waiting for someone you love.

Good job!

XoXo
Gaby