W0w thats really g00d!! 5/5 -- keep it up!
l00k at s0me 0f mine t00 if y0u have the chance
l0ve always
aLi

Wow this is a great poem!!! it had so much depth and meaning to it!!!! 5/5 totaly!!!!! sheck out some of mine sometime, they aren't as good as yours but i'm working on it!!!!